Emma is a simple woman. She met a girl, and this girl introduced her to Leo. Although Leo like Emma so much, he can't tell her feelings to Emma. Until one day, Emma's new friend decided to setup a blind date for them. But it was not a successful plan. After a few days, Leo went to Emma's house and he told his feelings to her. Emma was so shocked, she did not expect that Leo like her. She run to her room and cried. For so many months they don't see each other anymore after what happened on Emma's house. They already forgotten each other.
the story is good but you should make it longer. good job!!
TumugonBurahinYou should have made a little changes in your story but its nice, make it longer.
TumugonBurahinStill needs a little improvement, but it's good.
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